Moon (haiku #8)

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Crescent moon

rises with an army of stars

beyond the horizon.

©Kiran bantawa 2013
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2 responses to “Moon (haiku #8)

  1. This is a wonderful Haiku. After reading I thought think you might make it even a stronger Haiku , when you would use instead crescent moon… harvest moon to make an even stronger connection with the army of star. Just my thought, I hope you did not mind sharing my thought.
    groetjes, Francina .

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